This is quite dark for you, comparing to the light fun pictures you've posted. Nice change of direction.

She's cute, my fav part is her eye's very original and colorful i like it, i luv the lil curve around her face also , very nice style.
Good work!

Good dark style! I really enjoy the spiderweb covering her eye there! The tear is a nice touch as well though when I look at her face, I'm not really getting a sense of overall sadness. It's all in the eyes! Very nice concept though, and I really like the texture you used for the background. Nice work.

this is different from the others. the spider web is awesome and the other eyes in the image really add a touch of mystery. wondering what the bubbles represent? her hair seems stiff, maybe from the dying? funny how you wanted to start out with a "sunny" image! i like the way your mind works. looking forward to the next one.
claudia

how beautiful
i love the blue lips and teh eyes! you did a great job on this!

ah wow! i love the eyelashes! and lips. wondeful concept

I like colors used on her face.
She looks different

Very dramatic!....nice colors!
Carlos

Whoaa, so different and good. I like dark The lips and eyes are fantastic, and so are the colors in the face. You may need to work on the hair a tiny bit, it seems the shape is a little odd. If you imagine where the head is underneath the hair, I think you will notice that something maybe a little off. Maybe not, who knows. The nose seems a bit flat, I think if you added some darks to balance the lights there, it would look very nice. The little area under the nose and above the lips is a little too defined, you might want to tone that part down a bit. Are those demonic eyes that I see under her in the background? I really can't crit too much on this one, I really like it a lot.

I really like this
Love the darkness, also nice colors.

This is funky, I really like the blue tones in the face

10x so much for nice comments ,i agree with this that the hair is a little bit off ,i would like to mike it seems false ,i see the nose problems 10x so much

look a bit strange, but nice atmosphere! Great work!

interesting stuff...nice colors....

Really pretty eyes and lips.

nice work with that colors
i really like the highlights

Reflects in her eyes are opposed (left for her right eye, right for her left eye) which is nonsense IMO. She looks more like a broken doll than a real girl. This impression is enforced by her strange haircut (you should have avoided these two locks which are really unatural I think).
Otherwise the colours you used are great and wisely chosen. I think your composition is original with the face on the top and these undefinited eyes things at the bottom.

Great ilustration. I think you are doing a good progress in your work. I like to see that you are mixing and adding more colors in your palettes. Maybe you could have added some of the face colors in the hair and used some lighter skin detail in her neck. Love the composition and the dark atmosphere. Good work with the expression too. +9

Lovely work, your peacock colored/style eyes really are awesome, as well as the web

yes always the result is so different... +10

I like the darknes in this and the slight abstract nature of it too

Oh, those eyes,
I love them,
good work.

Great expression

10x so much for the crits and votes guys

very very nice, I think it's your best, good choice of colours and imagination

I like the makeup colours, although I think the lighting is a bit confused, but keep on rockin'

I really love this! Her face almost looks like burnished leather, but those emerald/turqouise strokes around her dark eyes really make a great color counterpoint, and work so well in her world. Another thing that I like is the mix of lighting styles. The "scientific" lighting - the light source coming from the upper left, affecting her hair, nose and lips such as Charles Eakins used - and The "magic" lighting that emanates from the rest of her face - like Rembrandt's incredible examples. I also liked what you had to say very much and agree with you totally. Isn't it funny and wonderful the way a painting will reveal itself to you? Like you say, it sometimes ends in a totally different place than where it began!

Woah, this is really interesting. I like the colours you used on her lips and eyes. It looks iridescent, kinda like beetle wings. Also, the web effect on her one eye is just... awesome!

The nose is a little off, and the hair, I think, could use a little work. The two bits at the front that go off to the side look a little strange. Other than that, though, I really like this piece!

I love the way the girl is painted, she looks like some insane doll.
I think the hair looks a bit off the the rest of the painting.