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Birth

Photography Photography \ Nature | 04/06/08 @791 | razpna | Comments critiques (18) | Views views (600)


Birth
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Hi i go out with friends and made some photos to this birth it is so cute C&C are welcome as ever
 
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Avatar blackshad

 04/06/08 @834

nice picture
i could crop some part of the top and the right to get a better composition
i would also darken the bird a little to make it pop out of the background
+7
 
Avatar everseen

 04/06/08 @847

This needs some post-work imo ;) .
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/06/08 @885

Usually better if the bird is faced towards us the viewer.

The ground section is not 100% as it is distracting with to many details.

What is that white stuff? A little section of it looks overexposed.
 
Avatar mamoun

 04/06/08 @932

Nice work
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 04/06/08 @949

Nice details on the bird and leaves.
Best tip at this stage: Take the picture from a much lower angle. You sometimes need to lay on the ground to get it right.
 
Avatar Byonder

 04/07/08 @168

Sorry razpna, this really looks like a snapshot to me. This shot would really have to be taken from a completely different angle (as Roadrunner suggested, a lower angle would probably have helped), and with a different composition to work. I can't really suggest any other cropping variations that would improve this, so I'll just say, "keep shooting and experimenting" :)
 
Avatar razpna

 04/07/08 @482

10x to everyone :) you give me good constructive comments
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/07/08 @561

It is a cute capture,
I would remove the tissue & make it a B&W.
 
Avatar Vasco

 04/07/08 @640

I agree with Patrick. Too many elements too distract me. Ans the main "BG" colour is identically to the main subject which mingles them a bit, them you have that white stuff and the greens. I think you can do much better. :)
 
Avatar ersen-t

 04/07/08 @690

good shot.
agree with cupcake, B&W-version would be nice.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/07/08 @778

Nice capture and details!
Good work Ioana!
Carlos
 
Avatar workster

 04/09/08 @079

I agree that a lower angle and/or less busy background would help.
 
Avatar Ztak

 04/09/08 @441

Agree with all the things that have been said.... i think the pic has too much sharpness added in photoshop...so less sharpness imo.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/09/08 @633

Nice capture!
cool details
 
Avatar Daykan

 04/11/08 @002

Cute!!! It´s good to see another form of art in your gallery, nice!!
Keep working, Iona!!
 
Avatar curlyhair

 04/13/08 @486

Cute!And I love the leaves texture.Nice sharpness. Great shot
 
Avatar razpna

 04/13/08 @783

10x a lot for comment sorry that i can not write more comments but now i have exams and i am really bissy
 
Avatar zaclab

 04/14/08 @488

Lovely shot :)
 
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GFXuser name:
   razpna
Full Name:
  Ioana Atanasova Atanasova
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  Female
Birthdate:
  10/28/1989 (18)
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  Bulgaria
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  12/17/2005

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