Nice work!
From a very personal viewpoint, what I think you could improve is to work on your pencilstrokes. You have very strong, dynamic and dominating lines here - I feel it's the lines that takes the attention here, and not so much the subject.
If you still want to keep this way of shading, you should work with strong contrasts in light and shading in order to make it match the linework. The head of the frog looks good here because it has nice realistic shading and contrast. The body doesn't have so much of this.
Else, you can try to soften down the linework and do more cross hatching with variated strenght to the pencil.
But I still like your style! It's very "razpna".

thank you so much for the crit

I love your (this) way of drawing!
I agree with Sandra that the shading on the body could be a little more realistic. Also Improving the contrast between the subject and the background would help it "stand out" I think
From the thumb I could recognize it was yours

nice work Raz. About what the other fine two critiques said, maybe you could try using some of those textures like you used to and integrate them into your new work. It might make the subject really pop. On the other hand, I really like your pencil strokes and i actually think you have very good variations of thickness. Odd areas for me are the two dark spaces between the arms and the body. They seem to be another entity rather than space. Always fun to see your work

he he cool work

Really cool! Love this crazy line style!
You know that i´m your fan, so i see this really good!

This small animal approaches on a monetary denomination Beautifully

Cool !
great character
Ioana I love your style

thank you so much for comments

lovely strokes! nice one!

Very cool style!

Great job
+10

very cool style. the scratches and the colors make this unique

I think the technique is cool and well aplied. However, it may benefit from a wider variety of the lines. Meaning, make some lines smaller, others thinker, thiner... Depending on the lightning or the fabric. It may make the piece look a bit more rich.

Anyway, great work =)

Love your style!
Beautiful!
Carlos